Pack is almost perfect but what I would change would be foam in the shoulder pads, I doubled up the 3d Mesh. It tends to twist and bunch up more without it. Drop the Beastee rings and just use webbing on the attachment points.
What worked perfectly: 4" extra width on the mesh then box pleated is right on. Decreasing the shock cord 1/2" from the width of the pack gives it enough snapback. 1" seam allowance works great, cut the fabric inside down to 1/4-1/2", roll the allowance over inside, sew, add grosgrain, sew, is the way to go. Works great. Lineloc 3 WSR Buckle system is great.
Required Materials:
HyperD 300 polyester - Black Gutermann MARA 70 thread - Black Tensionlock - Standard - 1/2" D-Ring: Beastee Dee® - 1/2" Nylon Webbing - 1/2" Lineloc 3 WSR Buckle Pocket Mesh (zpacks) 1/2" One Wrap Velcro 2.5mm Shock Cord Spacer Mesh - Black (amazon)